hold your breath

Stars, hold your breath now.
We’re going underwater,
and time here is short.

 

(Am including this in Rebecca’s Haiku my Heart Friday…it’s been too long!)

 

 

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15 thoughts on “hold your breath

  1. Pingback: Thursday Poets Rally Week 46 (June 16-22, 2011) | Promising Poets' Poetry Cafe

  2. Your haiku is stunning! The word that comes to mind is used in the other comments too, and it’s true: breathtaking! Enjoy your weekend!

  3. I love the photo. When I read the haiku, I thought it might be a reflection of the sky on the water. I see that it is a fantastic Hubbel space telescope photo. Your haiku made me imagine, and that’s a good thing. Lovely words strung together. Good job.

    Peace.

  4. outstanding art.

    Please Check out short story slam week 5,

    write a poem or a story based on the image, link to our week 5 collection of short stories, and have fun!
    Bless your day!
    Hope to see you in,
    Keep your creative juice running,
    BEST!
    xoxox

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